Peer Review

http://alissasphotojournalismblog.blogspot.com/

Paragraphs: She had a fair amount of paragraphs, but the context could have been more in depth to add more wordiness.
(40/50)
Quotes: Her quotes were informative and well done, there just weren't enough of them.
(15/25)
Inverted Pyramid: Great!
(25/25)
+ 10 Bonus Points

90!!